masakishi
i r 4 n00ble7.
Tomo - Friend
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Haiku
Sept 1, 2008 13:02:10 GMT -5
Post by masakishi on Sept 1, 2008 13:02:10 GMT -5
Television screen That warm glow seduces me I can't look away
I love all the girls Their curves make me so horny Calm down little one!
(why yes, I am indeed perverted) (and lastly...)
Let's all write haiku you know it will be fun, no? hmm, well maybe not.
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moero
i r 4 n00ble7.
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Haiku
Sept 1, 2008 13:51:38 GMT -5
Post by moero on Sept 1, 2008 13:51:38 GMT -5
I smell the sweet meat Hidden underneath their skulls Such longing to feast
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Haiku
Sept 1, 2008 21:16:33 GMT -5
Post by Max "Lone" Raine on Sept 1, 2008 21:16:33 GMT -5
Might just as well add the Haiku attempt I once posted on dA and FA =P I don't even know if I got the idea of Haiku right =/ I think it had to do with syllables, right? 5-6-4? In which case mine are flawed =P But I think I could save 'em =P
Alright, Eclipse, haiku in three parts:
1. "Lone wolf is howling. The night sky is dark, endless. The full moon is bright."
2. "A howl full of emotion. Sadness, sorrow, longing and rage. The full moon is dull."
3. "Separated from his pack. He wanders the wilds on his own. The full moon is black."
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moero
i r 4 n00ble7.
Posts: 47
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Haiku
Sept 2, 2008 13:06:23 GMT -5
Post by moero on Sept 2, 2008 13:06:23 GMT -5
It's 5-7-5
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masakishi
i r 4 n00ble7.
Tomo - Friend
Posts: 39
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Haiku
Sept 2, 2008 16:06:17 GMT -5
Post by masakishi on Sept 2, 2008 16:06:17 GMT -5
Newscast is the best! I check the site all the time New comic pronto!
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Sept 3, 2008 12:39:34 GMT -5
Post by Max "Lone" Raine on Sept 3, 2008 12:39:34 GMT -5
It's 5-7-5 Oh well xD I'm horrible at counting syllables though =P But I think I might have gotten it right in my attempt xD
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